Didn't Believe You

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By time2rite

Fort Pickens, FL USA
Fort Pickens, FL USA
Source: time2rite
said you didn't love me
hadn't for years
I cried
said, "I still love you"
you told me that would go away
didn't believe you.
 
said you weren't going anywhere
teasingly poking me
I smiled
said, "I still love you"
you packed saying you'd be back
didn't believe you.
 
we don't talk much
only emails back and forth
nothing too heavy
since I asked, "Do you love me like a woman?"
and you said, "Yup"
didn't believe you.

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d.william Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

voted up and awesome. We certainly know instinctively when someone loves us, or not, we just don't admit it to ourselves. Good poem.

time2rite 6 months ago

Yes, d.william, we instinctively do know when we are loved or not, and we often try to ignore those instincts for many reasons. I have found this true in my own life. Thank you for your vote and comments, not just on this hub, but others of mine as well; I greatly appreciate the feedback and votes!

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